Between distances



man talking to a woman in red




"I have something to tell you."

"Yeah sweetheart, tell me."

"I don't feel the same for you.:

*Stunned silence.*

"Hahahahahahaha. I got your prank. You mean you love me more now. Right?"

"No."

"Oh cummon stop kidding."

"No really, something has changed , something is different."

"Why this sudden change?" Sadness crept in his tone.

"The distance I guess. Me here, you abroad. "Yeah that is the reason I guess."

"Hmmm, you are breaking my heart you know. a sad smile flickered on his lips."

"There's more."

"More???"  He raised his eyebrows

"Yeah. I can't stand this long distance relationship anymore."

"So whats your plan."

"Marry me."

"Listen, we can work it....Wait...WHAT??"

"Yes marry me. And take me with you where ever you go." She said with a notorious smile.

"Oh yes baby yes." Be picked her in her arms and spun her around before he kissed her breathless.


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.





This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
- See more at: http://blog.blogadda.com/2013/06/21/weekend-creative-writing-india-bloggers#sthash.Ih4nLaLv.dpuf

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
- See more at: http://blog.blogadda.com/2013/06/21/weekend-creative-writing-india-bloggers#sthash.Ih4nLaLv.dpuf
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
- See more at: http://blog.blogadda.com/2013/06/21/weekend-creative-writing-india-bloggers#sthash.Ih4nLaLv.dpuf

10 Obiters:

Rat said...

nice and a happy twist :-)

A Rat's Nibble

the factfiction said...

thanks :)

kalpana solsi said...

so sweet .wonderful twist in the end.

the factfiction said...

Thankyou kalpana

Anonymous said...

thats too nice:

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the factfiction said...

Thankyou :)

Megha Punjabi said...

nice one!

the factfiction said...

Thankyou megha :)

kalpana solsi said...

nice one. Romantic and naughty

the factfiction said...

thankyou kalpana :)

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