This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 40; the fortieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "MAKE A WISH"
"Blow the candles and make a wish"
She looked around the room with awestruck eyes. Drenched in the candle light and fragrance of millions of roses, the room looked nothing less than heaven itself. The glass table in front of her was decorated with little red hearts all over and in the center stood a mesmerizing cake with few candles tinkling on it. It seemed nothing short of a dream.
"Cummon baby, blow the candles and make a wish."
"Will you make it come true" she said smiling mischievously in a childlike tone.
"That we will see", he said slapping lightly on her back, smiling.
She giggled.
She bent down blowing the candles and closed her eyes making a wish. Just then she felt a piece of cloth being tied on her eyes.
"What is this now?", she chided.
"Shhh, baby keep cool", he whispered in her ears.
She felt the heat of his palm running down on her arms. His fingers entwined in hers. She felt his warm breath blowing her hair delicately. She took a step back, and then another and then another, and then she felt the coldness of wall on her back. She gasped, felt helpless. Not being able to see whats happening, she had to rely on her senses and more than that on him. His lips touched the side of her neck and she shivered. Her arms moved upwards touching the wall till they touched each other, and she felt another piece of silk being tied around her wrist.
"Honey", she whispered breathlessly in anticipation.
"Am here", he said tracing her skin from jaw to neck with his lips.
Being blindfolded, she was now more aware of his touches, and that only increased her anxiety of what lay ahead. It was when she tried to move her arms that she realized her arms were hooked. She was even more helpless now, and even more turned on. She was on a strange grounds. She wanted to see him, but can't, She wanted to touch him, but can't. Suddenly she heard a slow seductive music being played and followed by an audible rip of her gown. And her gasp that followed was even more audible. She soon forgot everything as his hands touched her shoulders and his lips started devouring her. He swept her off with a kiss like that of a starving man. She wanted to feel his body against her own, but he maintained a distance. He trailed a series of kisses on every inch of her neck, her shoulders , her arms, and everywhere except where she wanted it the most, her soft perked buds.
"Baby please, they are craving for your attention", she breathed heavily, her sound hardly audible.
She moaned aloud as her wish was granted. She felt a gush of heat enveloping her as his warm tongue teased her buds and then ever so teasingly, he took them in between his lips. A current shot down through her spine. She whined. When he was satisfied, he moved down, his tongue leaving a trail of heat everywhere on her skin. Unconsciously her legs parted in anticipation. He got his hint and moved to the center. His tongue eagerly lapping on her wetness. She whimpered, She curved her back to take more of him. He took her with his tongue until she was satisfied. While she was still gathering her breath she felt the warmth of his skin on her own, and his desire on her just satisfied femininity. And she felt a wave of desire consuming her again. He held her back in his palms, raised her to meet him. Her legs tightly wrapped around her waist as he took her. Everything else was lost, time paused, the only thing that existed to her was him, the only thing she felt was him. The moment was consummate, the feeling was consummate, she felt consummate. She felt faint as an enormous orgasm grasped her. Next thing she remembered was lying on top of him, drenched in sweat, breathing heavy, untied.
"You knew my wish", she said gasping for air.
He smiled and hugged her tight.
She looked around the room with awestruck eyes. Drenched in the candle light and fragrance of millions of roses, the room looked nothing less than heaven itself. The glass table in front of her was decorated with little red hearts all over and in the center stood a mesmerizing cake with few candles tinkling on it. It seemed nothing short of a dream.
"Cummon baby, blow the candles and make a wish."
"Will you make it come true" she said smiling mischievously in a childlike tone.
"That we will see", he said slapping lightly on her back, smiling.
She giggled.
She bent down blowing the candles and closed her eyes making a wish. Just then she felt a piece of cloth being tied on her eyes.
"What is this now?", she chided.
"Shhh, baby keep cool", he whispered in her ears.
She felt the heat of his palm running down on her arms. His fingers entwined in hers. She felt his warm breath blowing her hair delicately. She took a step back, and then another and then another, and then she felt the coldness of wall on her back. She gasped, felt helpless. Not being able to see whats happening, she had to rely on her senses and more than that on him. His lips touched the side of her neck and she shivered. Her arms moved upwards touching the wall till they touched each other, and she felt another piece of silk being tied around her wrist.
"Honey", she whispered breathlessly in anticipation.
"Am here", he said tracing her skin from jaw to neck with his lips.
Being blindfolded, she was now more aware of his touches, and that only increased her anxiety of what lay ahead. It was when she tried to move her arms that she realized her arms were hooked. She was even more helpless now, and even more turned on. She was on a strange grounds. She wanted to see him, but can't, She wanted to touch him, but can't. Suddenly she heard a slow seductive music being played and followed by an audible rip of her gown. And her gasp that followed was even more audible. She soon forgot everything as his hands touched her shoulders and his lips started devouring her. He swept her off with a kiss like that of a starving man. She wanted to feel his body against her own, but he maintained a distance. He trailed a series of kisses on every inch of her neck, her shoulders , her arms, and everywhere except where she wanted it the most, her soft perked buds.
"Baby please, they are craving for your attention", she breathed heavily, her sound hardly audible.
She moaned aloud as her wish was granted. She felt a gush of heat enveloping her as his warm tongue teased her buds and then ever so teasingly, he took them in between his lips. A current shot down through her spine. She whined. When he was satisfied, he moved down, his tongue leaving a trail of heat everywhere on her skin. Unconsciously her legs parted in anticipation. He got his hint and moved to the center. His tongue eagerly lapping on her wetness. She whimpered, She curved her back to take more of him. He took her with his tongue until she was satisfied. While she was still gathering her breath she felt the warmth of his skin on her own, and his desire on her just satisfied femininity. And she felt a wave of desire consuming her again. He held her back in his palms, raised her to meet him. Her legs tightly wrapped around her waist as he took her. Everything else was lost, time paused, the only thing that existed to her was him, the only thing she felt was him. The moment was consummate, the feeling was consummate, she felt consummate. She felt faint as an enormous orgasm grasped her. Next thing she remembered was lying on top of him, drenched in sweat, breathing heavy, untied.
"You knew my wish", she said gasping for air.
He smiled and hugged her tight.
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11 Obiters:
Now was this fact of fiction whatever .. it was hot .... hot, hot, hot .. All the Best for BAT ..
My Attempt - Vikas Khair - Wishes
Thanks vikas
Wooow...The Erotic attempt...I don't know what to say here, but very beautifully as well as gracefully written... :) and as Vikas sir said this was definitely very hot :)
thanks ayushi :) glad u enjoyed.
Nice attempt!:)
Sensual!!
thanks Akila
Thanks uthra
That's was too Erotic!
a lovely write..
thanks simran.
very well narrated
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