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Its a sunrise, or a sunset
its hard to decide
a weekday, or a weekend
impossible to find
but why bother
why bother to what it is
a moment
from your life is this
Put your bare feet down
let the sea drench it a bit
set yourself free to the vast vast sky
make a castle
take a walk
think, admire, observe
forget your worries
shed your inhibitions
this is your life
you live it once
and you never can turn the wheels back
love it
watch it turn the hues
from dawn to dusk
into the shades of orange....
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Credits
Image - Shades of Orange by Harsha Chittar
Courtesy - Curious Dino Photography via www.blogaton.in
37 Obiters:
Really beautiful poem. Loved it.
Hi Dreamer! :)
Your words have appealing power that says, ''Live your each moment at best''
Lovely read!
Best wishes...
Thanks :)
and thanks to you
thank you simran..am glad you liked it :)
Beautiful words... and the more important thing is it was spontaneously written by you. :)
thanks samie :)
//why bother to what it is
a moment
from your life is this//
half the problems will get solved by itself if we start thinking as this! Enjoyed your post! ATB!
Do stop by my blog! Cheers - Kappu
Lovely Post all the best for BAT
~Desire v/s Destiny
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thnaks rahul :)
kappu..thanks a lot...yeah truly said...ATB!
What an innovative way of saying 'Stop to smell the roses!". Nice piece! ATB for BAT!
सुन्दर रचना
thanks deepa...and same wishes for you:)
dhanyawaad sashi ji
Straight and simple poetry.. Very beautiful, Tanaya. All the best for the Blog-a-Ton :)
Leo - My Blog-a-Ton Story
Thanks a ton leo...am glad you dropped by :)
lovely ... A moment from life this is!
Very nice poem....BeaUtiful
Manasa thanks :)
jaish_vats..thanks lady :)
Lovely poem :)
Thank you neha :D
Ah! A very beautiful poem. Feel-good factor it has :)
Relevant message to all of us who are in a hurry and have no time for living :-)
very true one should live life to fullest in each moment...best wishes for BAT :)
thanks a lot khistij
aativas..that was xactly my purpose :)
thank you karan :)
the sweet and simple nature of ur poem touched my heart!
ATB for BAT
Do stop by Apala-BAT30 entry
thanks Apala...am honored :)
loved the simpleness of the poem!
lovely read! :D
Thank you ashzzes :)
do drop by again
the beginning seemed to rhyme, esp the first 8 lines, with 8th one having 3 syllables less.
it's my preference to read rhyming poems with short lines.
but it's great still
:)
thank you fro bringing it to notice Yatin..but I don't find it being rhymed..and if it does it is only by chance. And as for syllables..i always forget counting while ih write..i have more interest in words than in numbers :P
Simple and sweet poetry.. Loved your way of writing.. Keep writing.. All the best..
Someone is Special
Thank you :)
someone is indeed special :)
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