This post is written for the Best 55 Fictionist Contest, hosted by Sasikumar Raja Blogs at Beginner
Rain,
thunder,
banging flaps of windows,
sleepless me.
Lightening and a glimpse of her.
She cant be here, she is gone to
heaven.
Another glimpse of her. May be she ain't. Maybe she came back
for me, My mother.
Lightening and her gnarled photograph instead where she stood.
Reality strikes.
And I howled in pain.
She did not scare me..For she was the one who loved me selflessly and I loved her back |
Rain,
thunder,
banging flaps of windows,
sleepless me.
Lightening and a glimpse of her.
She cant be here, she is gone to
heaven.
Another glimpse of her. May be she ain't. Maybe she came back
for me, My mother.
Lightening and her gnarled photograph instead where she stood.
Reality strikes.
And I howled in pain.
18 Obiters:
Fantastic expression of emotion, and feel... I loved it..:) best wishes.. take care...
Thankyou sasikumar :)
Nice...
Thanks :)
Very moving!
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Thanks Anupama
Btfly expressed. A haunted little piece this one!
Btw, first time here. Following your blog. :)
Wish you all the best with the contest...
A great lier....ummm shall I believe what you said :p
Thanks a lot :)
@thefactfiction: Of course you shall. Now that I have voted for your piece. :)
Awww thats real sweet of u
This really touched the heart ... well written !!!
Thank you :)
maybe only 2 individuals understand the depth of it; you and her
nice work
thank you deeps...guess you have too
Wow! An awesome 55 fiction. You did justice to the entire plot, great idea :)
Pomy Thank you :D
i like the blog. :)
thanks mohit :)
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