that drug he feeds me
with his lips entwined in mine
transports me to world another
where his love does shine
"kisses"
"where"
"on your lips"
"am drugged"
"come fly with me"
"take me"
"we are there"
"hold me tight, i might fall"
"I wont let you"
"am in heaven"
"with me?"
"in your arms"
"see the sky"
"I see only you"
"close your eyes and feel me"
"like my breath"
"and am breathing you"
"like one soul"
"yes, we are"
"I love you"
"I love you back"
She sighs
and they kiss
while the world fades away around them
and rain pours..drenching them..uniting them..into one soul..till forever lasts
9 Obiters:
You have played with words here
I loved the way the words have been used
liked this piece of poetry !
thanks you so much rahul..this was actually a conversation :)
Wow, what a fabulous portrayal you've acheived. I was totally touched. Read this
http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/06/insatiable.html . I think you might like it. Let me know what you felt about it.
By the way, very nice blog. Keep up the good work
Ahaan ... ;)
Saucy !
thanks a lot anupam :)
hahahaha...tomato aur chilli?? :P
wonderful...read in a breath :D
thankyou so much :)
Wonderfull conversation... And woth words you are good.. So touchy and romantic post.. Keep writing
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